Michael J. Mahon wrote:
I have a couple of "nits" to point out: 1) the two Apple keys are not "function" keys (which deliver a key code), but "modifier" keys, like Shift and Control. 2) You refer to the internal game port as "a set of pins" when it would be more descriptive to say, "a 16-pin DIP socket".
And things like "65C02 sticker" instead of "Enhanced". Some of the paragraphs read like they were lifted from apple2history and changed a little here and there - did that happen?
It's a good start, but it needs a lot of editing.