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Re: Text Adventure Data Structures



On Sat, 10 Jul 2004 20:36:07 +0000 (UTC), Paul Allen Panks
<panks@sdf.lonestar.org> wrote:

>"Text Adventure Structures"
[snip]

In addition to the correction you made about line 103, there are two
small typos that I came across.

The first piece of code in your article lists lines 100 to 104 but the
paragraph right after that starts by saying:

>What lines 100 through 105 accomplish is to break the
[snip]

The 105 should be 104 because 105 doesn't appear for another couple
paragraphs and is part of the check for verbs.

Near the end of the article (in the second last paragraph) you have a
sentence that reads:

>All it takes in
>imagination, a willingness to learn and the ability to
>develop a storyline.
[snip]

I imagine you meant to say "All it takes IS".

Otherwise it was a great article and a very interesting read.  Thanks
for posting it.

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